To edit the cover page of my magazine, I have added the month and year that the magazine issue would have come out, that being March 2021.
My work has been short on the contents page. I have aligned the page numbers and article titles. To align the numbers, I added a construction line so I could set each period upon the line and be vertically aligned. I also added a row of periods between the other articles to draw in more attention from the audience.
I solicited two peer reviews and received positive feedback from both. I was also able to have some of my family members, including my mother, review my work. For some final touches, I edited more aspects of the pages. On the contents page, I lined up all the numbers and titles so they would not seem out of order. On the second featured article page, I added a solid black line to separate the article from the two interviews. I was not able to provide more interviews because I had no other responses. I could fully understand the program In-Design so I could have put more features into my magazine. One idea I had, but could not fulfill, was to have a very transparent picture of my violin behind the wording. I also wish I had a smaller camera so I could take a cool picture of the inside of a violin and use that in my article somehow.
Before I submit my magazine project there are a few aspects I need to change. I was given feedback and advice from my peers about my magazine. I was told to darken the edges of my magazine page or maybe just provide a shadow effect so the white title and subtitles can be easily read. I also need to add a month and year to determine the release of my magazine. Other aspects I could include in my magazine are adding more photos of other instruments instead of just the violin and removing indentations from my featured article. I was also given positive feedback, complimenting my pictures and well the minimalistic vibe my magazine presented.
